don't be humble

Hey,

Happy Thursday.

The week is almost done, let’s all rejoice and take a minute to breathe...

You got this.

And if you don’t, I apologize in advance.

The show must go on.

Today we have a hook that encourages you NOT to be humble.

Be prideful in your accomplishments and maybe you’ll go viral too.

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I made 6 million bucks by closing 85% of the business proposals I wrote, and I charge premium prices. Let me tell you the seven questions that allowed me to do that. 

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Why The Hook Works:

1. Numbers grab attention (6 million, 85%)

2. Shows proof of success upfront

3. Promises to share a specific system (seven questions)

4. Creates curiosity about what these questions could be

The Template:

I made [big number] by [achievement], and I charge [premium position]. Let me tell you the [specific number] [tools/methods] that allowed me to do that.

Our Example:

I made $2 million by writing emails, and I charge 5x market rates. Let me tell you the five email formulas that allowed me to do that.

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- Mr. Saga

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