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Today we're breaking down the commit to memory hook.

Word count: 237 words out of 283.

If you want to be a better storyteller, there is a sentence that I need you to commit to memory. Because if you can, every story you tell will be better.

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Why The Hook Works:

Makes a bold promise (better storytelling)

Creates curiosity (what's the sentence?)

Builds anticipation (commit to memory)

Stakes are clear (every story will be better)

The Template:

If you want to be better at [skill], there's a [thing] that I need you to commit to memory. Because if you can, every [outcome] will be better.

Our Example:

If you want to be better at sales, there's a question that I need you to commit to memory. Because if you can, every pitch will be better.

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- Mr. Saga

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